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作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-21 07:41 PM 標題: 5 play kicks la0.0 88all@@

reason: (1)CE
(2)feel bored to the kicks -_-
watch火影lol

bye all

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 11:50 AM 編輯 ]

作者: Mwater. 時間: 09-4-21 07:44 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 07:41 PM 發表
reason: (1)CE
(2)kicks ho moon-_-
watch火影lol
8 all

送你個AC比我先好走

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-21 07:46 PM

不嬲都唔當你有玩+.+

作者: Ｋiｎ 時間: 09-4-21 07:54 PM 標題: 回復 1# J.辛尼迪的帖子

吾玩kicks.. 轉玩勁舞丫 v__v' ?

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-21 08:12 PM

原帖由 Ｋiｎ 於 2009-4-21 07:54 PM 發表
吾玩kicks.. 轉玩勁舞丫 v__v' ?

are u kidding?

i never play it before

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 11:48 AM 編輯 ]

作者: D.艾加 時間: 09-4-21 08:12 PM

一升到30話悶?

作者: ＊禾確特＊ 時間: 09-4-21 08:13 PM

知自己得罪人多升吾到 lv?

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-21 08:36 PM

原帖由 ＊禾確特＊ 於 2009-4-21 08:13 PM 發表
知自己得罪人多升吾到 lv?

得罪人多-> seems that only u

after 30lv i don't think that lv is important for me

(just for me)
i never think that i cannot up lv because of u

or u think that u are so important in the kicks?
i had type all the reason in this post,use yr eyes ok?

don't be silly la

p.s:i didn't say that my english is gd.

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 11:48 AM 編輯 ]

作者: D.艾加 時間: 09-4-21 09:19 PM

人地用中文問你,你用英文答

nice~~~~

作者: ‵逆天°﹢行 時間: 09-4-21 09:31 PM

原帖由 D.艾加 於 2009-4-21 09:19 PM 發表
人地用中文問你,你用英文答 nice~~~~

maybe暗示自己英文勁

作者: ahim 時間: 09-4-21 10:44 PM

me 5g he say mud wo
use eng ho ging...
ys ar... me eng dao ho ging lol
u 5 sell ac???
or gv ur ac to me jie

作者: v__v 時間: 09-4-21 10:45 PM

特務J-_-v 唔好走喇-_-v

作者: devilman 時間: 09-4-21 11:13 PM

我100點收你ac

作者: bmf20041004 時間: 09-4-22 12:26 AM

jj 無左你我玩kicks都無意義......利物浦都可能由此而解散

一係你俾你個ac我

作者: ＊禾確特＊ 時間: 09-4-22 06:41 AM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 08:36 PM 發表

得罪人多-->人多 seems that only u
30lv jor need up lv?
i never think about i cannot up lv
u think u can affect me?
silly
i had type all the rea ...

你d英文都好勁..
又用拼音,又有岩既..
有無人明話番我知~

作者: no9halu 時間: 09-4-22 09:07 AM

lei ng ming he up wt mei?

me ming wo

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 11:59 AM

原帖由 ＊禾確特＊ 於 2009-4-22 06:41 AM 發表

你d英文都好勁..
又用拼音,又有岩既..
有無人明話番我知~

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9yr 6hi7jl3kb 9yj6nn1

<---if u like u can translate it into chinese

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 12:03 PM 編輯 ]

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 04:41 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 07:41 PM 發表
reason: (1)CE
(2)feel bored to the kicks -_-
watch火影lol
bye all

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 08:36 PM 發表

得罪人多-> seems that only u
after 30lv i don't think that lv is important for me (just for me)
i never think that i cannot up lv because of u
or u think that u are so important in the kicks?
i had type all the reason in this post,use yr eyes ok?
don't be silly la
p.s:i didn't say that my english is gd.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
"had type"is obviously wrong.There exists 2 mistakes.First,after had,p.p. should be used(typed).Second,past perfect tence cannot use in this sentence.
It can only be used when 2 or more events have to mention in the past.For example,I played after I had finished homework.
Hence,the correct sentence should be:I have typed all...
If it is a fact,present tence should be used.Thus,u should change "didn't" to "don't" or "never"

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:59 AM 發表

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9 ...

The first sentence,i don't want to explain again...
"can't u" should be changed into "aren't u",just like "isn't it".
In the third sentence,"who was" should be added between child and born.Because before born,"was"is needed.
ps:i only get lv 2 in my CE english.i have to do more proof reading to get progress...anyway,+OIL@.@

[ 本帖最後由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 05:10 PM 編輯 ]

作者: wingyee911 時間: 09-4-22 05:05 PM

咁易都唔明的話我都冇計了

作者: R0man 時間: 09-4-22 05:27 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

NICE@@

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-22 06:16 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:59 AM 發表

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9 ...

錯到7彩

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-22 06:16 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 06:18 PM

原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

錯到7彩

睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 06:19 PM

原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯

請賜救

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 06:32 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improving my english for CE is great

i never say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 編輯 ]

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 06:34 PM

原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

錯到7彩

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"<--- what's wrong-__-i don't understand

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 編輯 ]

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 06:38 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:32 PM 發表

gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improve my english for CE is great
i didn't say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal

improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 06:40 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:38 PM 發表

improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s

ch jor by myself

(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-)

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 06:41 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"

cross out to,or simply add want before to

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 06:42 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 發表

cross out to,or simply add want before to

i type wrong for that sentence-.-
just just---->just want-_-

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 06:43 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:40 PM 發表

ch jor by myself
(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-)

no change,no improvement

作者: J.辛尼迪 時間: 09-4-22 06:44 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 發表

no change,no improvement

i agree

i am improving now

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-22 06:59 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:18 PM 發表

睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\

你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-22 07:00 PM

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"

疊詞

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 07:24 PM

原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:59 PM 發表

你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面

佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0=

作者: §~對唔起~§ 時間: 09-4-22 07:37 PM

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 07:24 PM 發表

佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0=

佢話凸登比寫簡單d比人睇wor--

作者: no9halu 時間: 09-4-22 08:25 PM

人地名校,你同人玩英文?

作者: ahim 時間: 09-4-22 08:29 PM

li day say mud ar...chat together la

作者: ~聰明~ 時間: 09-4-22 10:06 PM

原帖由 no9halu 於 2009-4-22 08:25 PM 發表
人地名校,你同人玩英文?

我讀中文中學ga...名乜春校,英文得果2等,岩岩好夠升中6 ja= =

作者: Desailly 時間: 09-4-22 11:43 PM

CE後再返來玩啦,好嗎?

作者: 嘉敏溪 時間: 09-4-23 04:10 PM 標題: 代理各????，?格??

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