was arrested 係咪被動式
1.He was arrested by offending laws<---岩5岩grammer?
2.sent out 個sent字當動詞用? make use of 個make 當動詞用? send out 解發出 講出得5得?
3."...."said mary 定mary said ...said後面除左可以加adverd之外 仲可以加咩
4..作文個陣全篇都過去 ..感想一定要現在式?? 過去式唔得?
5.開頭 成日見人Normally跟住, 係咪一定要adverb先開得頭
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1.He was arrested because he breached the law / went against the law / committed crime
你要用by既係by邊個 e.g. by the police / cop
2.是,是,通常係 the mail / message was sent (was ___ 係被動式) (past tense係因為你講緊既呢秒鍾,個mail多數已經send撚左)
3. ...... 睇你想形容咩囉 e.g.加 while mary was xxx ing (當mary做緊xxx既時侯)
4.作文多數係過去式穩陣 感想係數係現在式係因為,你寫果刻都係咁諗先會咁寫 p.s.個個情況不同
5.要加連接詞(linking words)較好, 如果唔係就句句太simple似口語唔似作文
e.g. therefore, moreover, furthermore, nevertheless, inspite of, despite, to conclude, in conclusion, firstly, secondly