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白色夢古

短講題目:What do you like most about your school?


I like the school playground so much.
The main reason is that it is more diverse .
We can play some activity ,such as a basketball ,football or volleyball in the playground.
It is exciting to playing any sport.
I think the playground is practical and big enough to play anything .
It could not only play some sports,but also learn more knowledge.
Many years ago , I always played basketball after school.
Sometime ,seeing the school playground .
I felt regretful so much ,this is because I should not play basketball ,since I am preparing the exam.






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[ 本帖最後由 白色夢古 於 10-1-16 11:16 AM 編輯 ]

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I like the school playground so much. (人地問你邊到最鐘意, 第1句應回應題目吧@@)
I like the school playground the most.

The main reason is that it is more diverse . ( what do you mean by diverse in this sentense? i dont understand...)

We can play some activity ,such as a basketball ,football or volleyball in the playground.
We can play some activities there , such as basketball ,football and volleyball.

It is exciting to playing any sport.
It is exciting to play any sports. ( to - Infinitive, to後面的verb通常不變)

I think the playground is practical and big enough to play anything. (really? any game 會more reasonable)

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It could not only play some sports,but also learn more knowledge.
Besides, we can also learn something there other than playing sports.

Many years ago , I always played basketball after school.

Sometime ,seeing the school playground . ( WHERE IS THE SUBJECT???)
I felt regretful so much ,this is because I should not play basketball ,since I am preparing the exam. ( I AM PREPARING? 準備緊既時候打籃球?)
Now, when I look at the school playground, I feel regretful so much because i should not play basketball at that time since the exam was coming


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我覺上面星星果段用你條問題無關,
如果你話係因為係playground玩令你學到野,未免太牽強...
你可以講下自己用朋友係playground玩既一d開心既經歷, 令該地滿載你既回憶and so on.

白色夢古

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I like the school playground so much.(用very much/the most)
The main reason is that it is more diverse .
We can play some activity(洗唔洗+s) ,such as a basketball ,football or volleyball in the playground.
It is exciting to playing(to後面唔洗+野) any sport.
I think the playground is practical and big enough to play anything .
It could not only play some sports,but also learn more knowledge.
Many years ago , I always played basketball after school.
Sometime ,seeing the school playground .
I felt regretful so much ,this is because I should not play basketball ,since I am preparing the exam.

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We can play some activity ,such as a basketball ,football or volleyball in the playground.

we can enjoy activities such as basketball ,football or volleyball there