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本帖最後由 ngan8888 於 11-12-31 02:59 AM 編輯
Dear Hong Kong AVA palyer :
I will join the battle in 1/1/2012 12:30 am . I will try my best to kill all people use by SA58 (It is a tips to you).But I won't Use Gun at last , I will use my lovely 92F Hand Gun to kill you all at last , if it is ok I will use the M24 to show my 1 kill 8(USA SER I have been done it)to you .I will use MP5 in this battle because some Hong Kong player said some gun is dog (MAR and some shotgun), so i will play MP5 in this day and hope people will not think I am dog by useing SA58 . Thank for your support .
By SnowShovel
I will try my best to kill all people use by SA58
錯誤代碼:01
But I won't Use Gun at last
你唔用槍諗住用刀殺?串烘烘?
I will use my 's lovely 92F Hand Gun to kill you all at last
92F←味聽過AVA有呢把槍
Hand Gun←錯誤代碼:01 ,係Pistol,就算死都要用Hand Gun的話,都唔好分開2個字,佢地應該係同一個字
I will use my 's lovely 92F Hand Gun←錯誤代碼:01
按字面意思,應該係話 我將會用我可愛的92F手槍
請你係my後面加上 's
if it is ok I will use the M24 to show my 1 kill 8 (USA SER I have been done it) to you←錯誤代碼:01,02
應該係用me,唔係用my,人稱角度錯誤
仲有如果係禁的話,後面的to you會變左無意思
I will use MP5 in this battle because some Hong Kong player said some gun is dog (MAR and some shotgun)
gun is dog←錯誤代碼:02
is後面應該係用noob,唔係用dog
(MAR and some shotgun)
Galil Mar無人話過佢係狗槍,只係話過佢係雷射槍
some shotgun據我所知,只有DAO-12先係狗槍,M870,SPAS12/15,Sagia12,FN TPS都唔係
so i will play MP5 in this day and hope people will not think I am dog by useing SA58
↑錯誤代碼:01,02
this day一看就知文法錯誤
I am dog←放心,你係人,唔係狗,如果加面後面的 by useing SA58
個dog應該轉用noob,加上,響音字母尾(a,e,i,o,u)的動詞加ing的話
唔應該保留響音字母尾(大多數),應該係using
結論:此文章與yue1999的發膠文行為非常相似,雖然美國人唔會文法全部岩晒
但佢地D文法都唔會好似禁樣錯漏百出,同理佢都唔會禁串咀,用mp5串我地
冇技術,加上文章內容一看就知係用Google的垃圾翻譯,明顯係發文者係香港人
補充: 錯誤代碼:01=文法錯誤
錯誤代碼:02=用字不當
以上內容是小弟(英文小測:12/20)的批改
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