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乂含你爸條J乂 發表於 12-2-20 08:15 PM
用黎都晒氣
一定錯既

first, i would like to introduce my self to you
my name is xxx

乂含你爸條J乂

我先自我介紹,我的名字是XXX,
我最近的一份工作是在XXX有限公司從事倉庫及物流工作,
我在XXX有限公司工作已有6年,
我的職責是倉庫管理, 倉庫內的各文件,
倉存的進出記錄及報告, 盤點,
倉庫員工控制, 出發票,
訂購貨物, 聯絡運輸送貨事宜,
但因公司前景不樂觀, 所以已經離職了

good morning
my name is XXX
my last job was working at XXX co.ltd dealing with warehouse & logistics work
i worked there for six years
my duty involved warehouse management, warehouse all document,
Store inventory In/Out record and report, Store take,
Warehouse staff control, Pack up invoice,
Purchase Goods, Contact transport convey

grammar改好  內容不變
最後一句,你真係想講?

乂含你爸條J乂

〝Ex喵﹑ 發表於 12-2-20 08:19 PM
first, i would like to introduce my self to you
my name is xxx

myself係一個字A"A
i would like to introduce myself

呢句岩
不過我唔鐘意用

Ch!xD

let me introduce myself first,My name is xxx,
I am work in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in the last time
I work in XXX Co. Ltd. ing have about 6 year,
唔時再試...

BB 我錯咩

〝Ex喵﹑

乂含你爸條J乂 發表於 12-2-20 08:33 PM
myself係一個字A"A
i would like to introduce myself

終於岩

乂含你爸條J乂

Ch!xD 發表於 12-2-20 08:37 PM
let me introduce myself first,My name is xxx,
I am work in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in the ...

let me introduce myself first,My name is xxx,
I am work in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in the last time
I work in XXX Co. Ltd. ing have about 6 year

紅字都係錯處

Ch!xD

乂含你爸條J乂 發表於 12-2-20 08:40 PM
let me introduce myself first,My name is xxx,
I am work in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in t ...

I was working in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in the last time
I worked in XXX Co. Ltd. ing had about 6 years

grammar最屎

乂含你爸條J乂

Ch!xD 發表於 12-2-20 08:43 PM
I was working in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in the last time
I worked in XXX Co. Ltd. ing  ...

I was working in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in my last job
I worked in XXX Co. Ltd. ing about 6 years

〝Ex喵﹑

乂含你爸條J乂 發表於 12-2-20 08:45 PM
I was working in XXX Co. Ltd. warehouse & logistics in my last job
I worked in XXX Co. Ltd. ing ab ...

幫我作篇自介

乂含你爸條J乂

〝Ex喵﹑ 發表於 12-2-20 08:46 PM
幫我作篇自介

有咁毒寫咁毒

爭霸者

google唔錯丫

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乂含你爸條J乂 發表於 12-2-20 08:30 PM
我先自我介紹,我的名字是XXX,
我最近的一份工作是在XXX有限公司從事倉庫及物流工作,
我在XXX有限公司工作已 ...

good morning
My name is XXX
My last job was working at XXX co.ltd dealing with warehouse & logistics work
i have worked for six years at there
When i worked at there
my duty was warehouse management,
deal with all document,Store inventory In/Out record and report, Store take,
Warehouse staff control, Pack up invoice,
Purchase Goods, Contact transport convey,
But this company was not suit me, So i have resigned already.
thank you

早安
我的名字是XXX
我的最後一份工作是在XXX有限公司處理倉庫及物流工作
我已經在那裡工作了六年
當我在那裡工作
我的職責是倉庫管理，
處理所有文件，記錄和報告/ OUT商店庫存，存儲，
倉庫工作人員控制，收拾發票，
購買商品，聯繫運輸傳達，
但該公司不適合我，所以我已辭職了。
謝謝

幫你汁左D地方，你5應該話因為間公C 5掂所以走人，你會俾人覺得如果之後間公C 開始5掂，你都會走既感覺
同埋幫你加左D句子，睇上去更完整....有誤請指出..
另外，你前景果個英文用錯左，你果個前景指景物

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