[CE]Let's chat about FEZ in English!(Corrections are welcomed)

灼眼殺手

In consideration of the coming English CE, the idea of creating a thread which allows us to chat about FEZ in English in order to raise our standard of English was spread in my mind yesterday.
I wonder if there are any superiors who are fluent in English can give us some advice or correct our mistakes by viewing our posts.
Okay, let me start a topic first.

Do you agree that players under level 20 should not be allowed to join the frontline battle?
In my opinion, players under level 20 do not have enough abilities to contribute by joining the frontline.
Firstly, they obviously lack enough skills in variety, regardless which job I am referring to.
Besides, they are not able to equip superior equipment. Therefore, they have terrible defense regards to its lack of sufficiency. Moreover, it is also the reason why they cannot throw out a decent amount of damage.
In addition, the gap between levels affects supplementary damage. For instance, a level-40 mage has drastic supplementary damage when it attacks a level-1 warrior.

Overall speaking, I have to agree that players under level 20 should not be allowed to join the frontline.
Instead, they should mine the crystals or help the battle by summoning creatures such as Knights.
It does not only maximize their value of existence, but also provides more opportunities for them to score higher. In the result, they will gain more experience and earn more rings.

What do you all think?

[ 本帖最後由 灼眼殺手 於 10-5-6 02:40 PM 編輯 ]

Incoming

In consideration of the coming English CE, the idea of creating a thread which allows us to chat about FEZ in English in order to raise our standard of English was spread in my mind yesterday.

你個subject去左邊
似係Dangling modifier問題

成篇野工工整整 應該符合HKEAA要求吧
個人認為修飾太多

[ 本帖最後由 Incoming 於 10-5-6 06:45 PM 編輯 ]

hydefaith213

原帖由 iii007hk 於 10-5-6 06:31 PM 發表

Granted,it's perfect for the situation you provided.It's freedom.
However,what it really matters whether player under 20lv can join the frontline is not
as an easy condition as street but the dama ...

If you die in the street, you will deal some damage to the earth, and eventually the earth explodes
lol everyone should have the right to enjoy fez.

iii007hk

原帖由 stormfxx 於 10-5-6 06:21 PM 發表
For an examination, i think your passage is quite good. But don't mistake me, i mean for examinations only. You know, this is simply just too formal for talking about an online game.

My version:
T ...

Granted,it's perfect for the situation you provided.It's freedom.
However,what it really matters whether player under 20lv can join the frontline is not
as an easy condition as street but the damage.
Each died one can  damage  the whole group .
It is thirsty for us to reduce live in the frontline and,better equipment is preferred as well .
It's quite difficult for us to accept players under 39lv can have mature skills, not mention 20lv.

[ 本帖最後由 iii007hk 於 10-5-6 06:33 PM 編輯 ]

hydefaith213

原帖由 stormfxx 於 10-5-6 06:21 PM 發表
For an examination, i think your passage is quite good. But don't mistake me, i mean for examinations only. You know, this is simply just too formal for talking about an online game.

My version:
T ...

omg i love your signature! XD

hydefaith213

原帖由 iii007hk 於 10-5-6 06:15 PM 發表

However,it is operated by such a piece of sheet ,
which has innovated the funking bean.
I cannot save points now and I need a hand.

-0-
theres nothing i can do for you cuz i dont use funking bean.
maybe try phoning the company and scream at them. Maybe this will help

hydefaith213

原帖由 stormfxx 於 10-5-6 06:21 PM 發表
For an examination, i think your passage is quite good. But don't mistake me, i mean for examinations only. You know, this is simply just too formal for talking about an online game.

My version:
T ...

LOL
unless they get killed haha

stormfxx

For an examination, i think your passage is quite good. But don't mistake me, i mean for examinations only. You know, this is simply just too formal for talking about an online game.

My version:
The coming of English CE, sparked me an simple idea on improving our standard of English, by creating a thread about FEZ in English.

I wonder if there are any superiors who are fluent in English can give us some advices or corrections
on our mistakes by viewing our posts.
Okay, let me start a topic first.

Should players under level 20 be allowed to join the frontline?

Personally, i think anyone should be allowed to join the game, regardless of their levels, abilities, equipments or whatsoever.

Why? Instead of giving you an answer, i ask you a question. Should people not be allowed to walk on the street simply because they are too young, too poor, or have disability?

iii007hk

原帖由 hydefaith213 於 10-5-6 06:06 PM 發表
wow 2 pages of english in this thread!
im glad you guys are practicing your english through talking about fez :P
Lets stick to topic of fez instead of talking about exam techniqes.
Although i have  ...

However,it is operated by such a piece of sheet ,
which has innovated the funking bean.
I cannot save points now and I need a hand.

小恆=]

我想講 d?u 玩野? 沙煲咁大個拳頭見過未

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2kf被ce騎劫

Neko_b

原帖由 奸雄_HuNg 於 10-5-6 04:32 PM 發表
見到D英文我自卑緊/口\

+1
係時候學下野

hydefaith213

wow 2 pages of english in this thread!
im glad you guys are practicing your english through talking about fez :P
Lets stick to topic of fez instead of talking about exam techniqes.
Although i have only been playing for 6 months, i am totally addicted to this game. The gameplay is fantastic; the idea of summons, pvp combined with real time strategy just makes me love this game.

Scott

My "correction" is just to rewrite the original in my style only, not to say that the original one is incorrect.

Also, what I aim to do is to simply the original one so that use less words to express the same idea, so that within the words limit you can write more.  Don't think that you write more will score higher.  Just imagine you are the examiner, do you want to mark a paper with extra words?

灼眼殺手

原帖由 三條木 於 10-5-6 05:26 PM 發表

"they" here is not used as a key to define whether the subject is plural or not.

the reason why i don't think "it" is acceptable is:
because the species of the mage is specified as a human

"they" itself is defined as plural.
If you use a pronoun here, it refers to "a level-40 mage".
It must be singular.
Since the gender is not mentioned, you cannot tell whether it is a she or a he.
That is why I used "it".

三條木

原帖由 灼眼殺手 於 2010-5-6 17:19 發表


I think "it" is acceptable here since the gender of that mage has not been mentioned.
Plus, "they" is plural while "a level-40 mage" is not.

"they" here is not used as a key to define whether the subject is plural or not.

the reason why i don't think "it" is acceptable is:
because the species of the mage is specified as a human

灼眼殺手

原帖由 Scott 於 10-5-6 04:40 PM 發表


it係指緊遊戲內角色, ok的

One more thing, "an idea of doing something" or "an idea of (insert noun here)" are correct.

jack19921214

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加油吧樓主

灼眼殺手

原帖由 三條木 於 10-5-6 05:17 PM 發表

It should be

"For instance, a level-40 mage has drastic supplementary damage when they attack a level-1 warrior"

I think "it" is acceptable here since the gender of that mage has not been mentioned.
Plus, "they" is plural while "a level-40 mage" is not.

三條木

原帖由 Cc=] 於 2010-5-6 14:40 發表
"For instance, a level-40 mage has drastic supplementary damage when it attacks a level-1 warrior."
人唔應該用it 0.0…?

It should be

"For instance, a level-40 mage has drastic supplementary damage when they attack a level-1 warrior"