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大家有廉恥既話唔該自已作就唔好抄


Dear Sir/Madam,

To propose the recommendations of improvement of DJOnline



In recent years, DJOnline brings us much happiness. At the same time, it brings out many problems to players. It is crucial to improve it. In order to facilitate players’ inexpedience, there are some suggestions that can solve it. Hence, I would like to make these proposals.

1.Education
1.1. Cyber Bullying
Online games are entertain people. However, it is important to face up to the cyber bullying in DJOnline. In order to keep the game harmony, Alta Multimedia clearly has the responsibility to educate players be polite to others. As we all know, cyber bullying comes from argument and this discourage victim to play . This will diminish company’s income and its reputation will be damaged. Less argument, less bullied. If so, why do not give players’ a hand to bring them out from nightmare? It could be encourage people play it and build up the prestige of agency. However, it is time to do it. Propagate in the game would be sensible to remind players be good to others. Actually, being a well-mannered person is definitely the rule of thumb.

1.2.Health
Gazing at the cold flickering screen is a disinteresting and tiring experience. With respect to the healthiness of players, agency have to remind player how many time they spend on the game and urge players stop to continues. Most of the players will play to lose themselves. Furthermore, Sleep early is indispensable in our daily life. Therefore, individual timer should be offered (Not to force logout). A successful example is SDGO (SD Gundam Online). They have a small yellow sentence will show to player when he/she played for 1 hour or more.

2.Improvement of Event
After the education, It is messy about activities poorly timed. I believe many player cannot get some special items because of the time had not be organized reasonably. For example, many people cannot get “the 7 KING designation” nor “the 12 KING designation” ascribe to the time is not be set in golden time, which means the time that the most people will online. Some may anger about this as they need to have study or work at this time that cannot precipitate in the event. It would be beneficial to consider thinking carefully about the time taking such as 20:00 to 22:00 rather than lunch time, 14:00 to 16:00.  

3.Using of Words
3.1. Foul Language
Hong Kong is a city of speech-freedom. I believe many people cannot understand why some of the Chinese words that cannot be used. Even though it is a foul language, this is a traditional culture of Hong Kong. We cannot execute it trumped-up charges. It would be sensible if all of the words not to be ban. Hong Kong is our home. Our home have our language.

3.2.Unit
We can see “m”, ”k”, that the unit use to the price. When asked about the using of wrong unit, some may argue that “I like it!” or “Everyone will understand!”. Other argue that the opposite is ture. It is a serious issue that most of the cyber user think m means “萬” (10 thousand). This will mislead children, who are playing DJOnline. They may use these wrong units to their exam or test and they do not know. There is probably some truth in both arguments, but Alta Multimedia could consider educating player the right unit. Agency can open a page about what unit means like m=1 million, 100,0000 ; k=1 kilo, 1,000. Being a high quality person, who don’t want it?

4.Fair Fighting
Job-fair cannot be neglected. Some jobs have tremendous power and influential while some are eager it. This stir up hated and brings adverse influence. Strengthen jobs’ superiority is preferentially required to run. This makes players feel a sense of job satisfaction and security that can avoid the vicious circle of job-hop. For example, the value of physical defense of 66LV Knight can be increase and the value of physical attacks of 66LV Berserker can be in skyrocket. This would enhance the interest of the game.

To sum up, I strongly believe that there would have been that many benefits in improvement of DJOnline. I sincerely hope that my idea will be use to players and can be implemented.

Thanks.
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小弟英文唔係叻,大擔嘗試我不寫英文沒人寫英文,有錯請指正
BTW活動過左未?

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seanka 發表於 13-3-19 11:01 PM
甘勁GE 用英文-_-...我大學生都係用中文就算了...
但我覺得你有D寫錯了==有D仲唔係好明-_-UNIT PRICE ...

用英文都係扮勁既姐,不過小弟樂意虛心學習,
畢竟又唔係專精呢方面要用英文係有困難 哈哈 戴返頭盔先

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唔set啦,拎篇文出黎比大家評頭品足小弟樂於虛心學習,
不過終於有人留意到我d point喇,
其實真係有d無謂又夾硬爆point出黎講通佢,
HKDSE就係咁架啦,唔係冇500字架喇 :o)
Honestly,愈寫得後係真係愈hea,
unit方面都可以歸類埋education度,
唔係話唔比玩家用m做萬既單位,
只係做一d教育工作去比玩家作參考同認識正確單位,
唔好話我膠,都係果句:英文作文不用符合現實
其實我作呢篇野出黎都係just for fun而已,
甚麼獎品 I don't care,打鋪開心機,打篇開心文比人評頭品足,小弟心滿意足了
Fair Fighting主要係講extremely強化職業本身既特性,
例如天騎無倫地高防,魔鬥擁有秒人既高攻,影者無限加快攻速,法師技能更多元化 (純粹係咁已吹吹而已)

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white_silver 發表於 13-3-19 11:45 PM
QP我都考緊...暫時0pass
工作經驗唔難有, 睇你之後轉唔轉到份好工,
我還在找尋中...

借po過橋
想問一問大學畢業生在職人士打機relax木木版主大大哥哥一d關於護士學校既野

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white_silver 發表於 13-3-19 11:57 PM
本貼已嚴重離題...
變左學術交流-_-
我講埋呢句就算,

ban左雙非又有回流潮,
仲有好多野想問,可以inbox?

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文中有d英文唔可以直譯,係彥語
等同於 689係指梁振英咁解
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