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本帖最後由 多才多藝 於 13-3-19 09:47 PM 編輯

大家有廉恥既話唔該自已作就唔好抄


Dear Sir/Madam,

To propose the recommendations of improvement of DJOnline



In recent years, DJOnline brings us much happiness. At the same time, it brings out many problems to players. It is crucial to improve it. In order to facilitate players’ inexpedience, there are some suggestions that can solve it. Hence, I would like to make these proposals.

1.Education
1.1. Cyber Bullying
Online games are entertain people. However, it is important to face up to the cyber bullying in DJOnline. In order to keep the game harmony, Alta Multimedia clearly has the responsibility to educate players be polite to others. As we all know, cyber bullying comes from argument and this discourage victim to play . This will diminish company’s income and its reputation will be damaged. Less argument, less bullied. If so, why do not give players’ a hand to bring them out from nightmare? It could be encourage people play it and build up the prestige of agency. However, it is time to do it. Propagate in the game would be sensible to remind players be good to others. Actually, being a well-mannered person is definitely the rule of thumb.

1.2.Health
Gazing at the cold flickering screen is a disinteresting and tiring experience. With respect to the healthiness of players, agency have to remind player how many time they spend on the game and urge players stop to continues. Most of the players will play to lose themselves. Furthermore, Sleep early is indispensable in our daily life. Therefore, individual timer should be offered (Not to force logout). A successful example is SDGO (SD Gundam Online). They have a small yellow sentence will show to player when he/she played for 1 hour or more.

2.Improvement of Event
After the education, It is messy about activities poorly timed. I believe many player cannot get some special items because of the time had not be organized reasonably. For example, many people cannot get “the 7 KING designation” nor “the 12 KING designation” ascribe to the time is not be set in golden time, which means the time that the most people will online. Some may anger about this as they need to have study or work at this time that cannot precipitate in the event. It would be beneficial to consider thinking carefully about the time taking such as 20:00 to 22:00 rather than lunch time, 14:00 to 16:00.  

3.Using of Words
3.1. Foul Language
Hong Kong is a city of speech-freedom. I believe many people cannot understand why some of the Chinese words that cannot be used. Even though it is a foul language, this is a traditional culture of Hong Kong. We cannot execute it trumped-up charges. It would be sensible if all of the words not to be ban. Hong Kong is our home. Our home have our language.

3.2.Unit
We can see “m”, ”k”, that the unit use to the price. When asked about the using of wrong unit, some may argue that “I like it!” or “Everyone will understand!”. Other argue that the opposite is ture. It is a serious issue that most of the cyber user think m means “萬” (10 thousand). This will mislead children, who are playing DJOnline. They may use these wrong units to their exam or test and they do not know. There is probably some truth in both arguments, but Alta Multimedia could consider educating player the right unit. Agency can open a page about what unit means like m=1 million, 100,0000 ; k=1 kilo, 1,000. Being a high quality person, who don’t want it?

4.Fair Fighting
Job-fair cannot be neglected. Some jobs have tremendous power and influential while some are eager it. This stir up hated and brings adverse influence. Strengthen jobs’ superiority is preferentially required to run. This makes players feel a sense of job satisfaction and security that can avoid the vicious circle of job-hop. For example, the value of physical defense of 66LV Knight can be increase and the value of physical attacks of 66LV Berserker can be in skyrocket. This would enhance the interest of the game.

To sum up, I strongly believe that there would have been that many benefits in improvement of DJOnline. I sincerely hope that my idea will be use to players and can be implemented.

Thanks.
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頂呀頂呀頂!

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根本專業,
用英文。
點比=- =

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cyber bullying= =

foul language你都搬出泥= =好多game都block ga啦
呢樣好難有得improve ga喇

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Support~!
But actually, this game call GFonline but not DJonline.
GFonline operate by Alta and DJonline operated by GameCyber.

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點解搞到個個都用英文

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甘勁GE 用英文-_-...我大學生都係用中文就算了...
但我覺得你有D寫錯了==有D仲唔係好明-_-UNIT PRICE=.=...我差D以為係我READ更個D科PRODUCT 的UNIT PRICE都有問題升值下降影響SALES=? THEn 影響COST OF SALES THEN NET PROFIT=.=?

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甘勁GE 用英文-_-...我大學生都係用中文就算了...
但我覺得你有D寫錯了==有D仲唔係好明-_-UNIT PRICE ...


不能同意更多
因為我都唔係好明-_-"
其實係冇心機睇...

雷仔讀ACC的?A_A

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Must be 'GFonline is operated by ALTA ' LOL
其實用英文唔係話唔好 不過有時講到D專有用詞時
即使樓主TRANSLATE到 都味必有人睇得明
講野會受到制肘

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係呀木木今年最後一年了係時候做野-_-想真我己經遲佐好多人做野了-_-...

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Must be 'GFonline is operated by ALTA ' LOL

冇讀書太耐, D grammar錯哂-_-
多謝指証...
我都係寫番中文算...

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係呀木木今年最後一年了係時候做野-_-想真我己經遲佐好多人做野了-_-... ...

原來我大學同你讀同一科-_-
不過我出黎做左2年野了...

回正提, 樓主要SET權限嗎?
有需要可PM我, 我幫你SET

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小弟英文唔係叻,大擔嘗試我不寫英文沒人寫英文,有錯請指正
BTW活動過左未?

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第一句OF 完之後又OF己經有問題
Recommend the following improvements of DJOnline one by one


In recent years, DJOnline (GF ONLINE)?  brings( 唔係以前了咩Y 現在式) us much happiness. At the same time, it brings out many problems to players. It is crucial to improve it. In order to facilitate players’


Online games are entertain people.(NOT MEANINGFUL...)...  In order to keep the game harmony, Alta Multimedia clearly has the responsibility to educate players be polite to others. (HOW?)

SUGGEST MORE ONE METHOD THAT IS SEGREGATION OF DUTIES (AUDIT)@@


1.2.Health
(E個都幾難做到--)因為E家時勢多數都係晚上人多D


2.Improvement of Event
  ==RESTRUCTURING 都幾難... 建議微弱

3.Using of Words
3.1. Foul Language
我笑佐E度--


3.2.Unit

唔係好明---
4.Fair Fighting

also i do not understand... can give more detailed explanation?

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多才多藝 發表於 13-3-19 11:22 PM
小弟英文唔係叻,大擔嘗試我不寫英文沒人寫英文,有錯請指正
BTW活動過左未? ...

未,
如要改權限:
編輯>附加選項>閱讀權限>最高權限

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甘勁GE 用英文-_-...我大學生都係用中文就算了...
但我覺得你有D寫錯了==有D仲唔係好明-_-UNIT PRICE ...

用英文都係扮勁既姐,不過小弟樂意虛心學習,
畢竟又唔係專精呢方面要用英文係有困難 哈哈 戴返頭盔先

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唔想比人睇SET 權限啦-3-
因為我之前都發過擇文想大大比意見@@

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第一句OF 完之後又OF己經有問題
Recommend the following improvements of DJOnline one by one

雷生係咪到時諗住教書?-_-

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我想但問題目標己改變-_-...
$$$$$$

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我想但問題目標己改變-_-...
$$$$$$


千奇唔好做audit-_-
不歸路...
我已經不歸緊...
所以要玩GF relax下-_-
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