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發表於 09-1-8 09:14 PM |只看該作者 |倒序瀏覽 |打印

Its been long from last updates, so here come an english song;-

I used to think that I could not go on
And life was nothing but an awful song
But now I know the meaning of true love
I'm leaning on the everlasting arms

If I can see it.....Then I can do it
If I just believe it.....There's nothing to it
I believe I can fly.....I believe I can touch the sky
I think about it ev'ry night and day.....Spread my wings and fly away
I believe I can soar.....See me running through that open door
I believe I can fly....I believe I can fly.....I believe I can fly

See I was on the verge of breaking down
Sometimes silence can seem so awful loud
There are miracles in life I must achieve
But first I know it starts inside of me

If I can see it.....Then I can do it
If I just believe it.....There's nothing to it
I believe I can fly.....I believe I can touch the sky
I think about it ev'ry night and day.....Spread my wings and fly away
I believe I can soar.....See me running through that open door
I believe I can fly....I believe I can fly.....I believe I can fly

If I can see it.....Then I can do it
If I just believe it.....There's nothing to it
I believe I can fly.....I believe I can touch the sky
I think about it ev'ry night and day.....Spread my wings and fly away
I believe I can soar.....See me running through that open door
I believe I can fly....I believe I can fly.....I believe I can fly

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發表於 09-1-11 10:13 PM |只看該作者
算是不錯
不過個人覺得你太注重咬字 仲好刻意
畀人感覺不夠流暢  輕輕帶過就可以

仲有後期你-.-......敗筆
感情過於over

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發表於 09-2-10 11:23 PM |只看該作者
我略不同意樓上的朋友
我覺得唱者感情還差一點點,及有點用錯感情
而且企圖模仿原唱
沒什麼新鮮感
我聽不出你要飛出去的感覺
中間有一句歌詞錯調
但你的聲線蠻吸引
期待你的蛻變

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發表於 09-2-22 01:08 PM |只看該作者
原帖由 Chong 於 2009-1-11 10:13 PM 發表
算是不錯
不過個人覺得你太注重咬字 仲好刻意
畀人感覺不夠流暢  輕輕帶過就可以

仲有後期你-.-......敗筆
感情過於over


我都好同e感情過- -
太過抒情= =

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發表於 09-2-25 03:13 PM |只看該作者
樓主係男定女?


把聲好柔           假如唱得再大聲小小就比較理想

大概2:06 開始果段仔......好誇= =

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發表於 09-4-8 06:25 PM |只看該作者
放鬆D好d ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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