5 play kicks la0.0 88all@@

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原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:59 AM 發表

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9 ...

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原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯

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原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

錯到7彩

睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\

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原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯

請賜救

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improving my english for CE is great
i never say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 編輯 ]

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表

錯到7彩

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"<--- what's wrong-__-i don't understand

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 編輯 ]

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原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:32 PM 發表

gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improve my english for CE is great
i didn't say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal

improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:38 PM 發表

improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s

ch jor by myself
(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-)

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原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"

cross out to,or simply add want before to

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 發表

cross out to,or simply add want before to

i type wrong for that sentence-.-
just just---->just want-_-

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原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:40 PM 發表

ch jor by myself
(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-)

no change,no improvement

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 發表

no change,no improvement

i agree
i am improving now

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原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:18 PM 發表

睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\

你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面

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原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表

wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"

疊詞

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原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:59 PM 發表

你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面

佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0=

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原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 07:24 PM 發表

佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0=

佢話凸登比寫簡單d比人睇wor--

no9halu

人地名校,你同人玩英文?

ahim

li day say mud ar...chat together la

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原帖由 no9halu 於 2009-4-22 08:25 PM 發表
人地名校,你同人玩英文?

我讀中文中學ga...名乜春校,英文得果2等,岩岩好夠升中6 ja= =

Desailly

CE後再返來玩啦,好嗎?