5 play kicks la0.0 88all@@

J.辛尼迪

reason: (1)CE
(2)feel bored to the kicks -_-
watch火影lol
bye all

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:50 AM 編輯 ]

Mwater.

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 07:41 PM 發表
reason: (1)CE
(2)kicks ho moon-_-
watch火影lol
8 all

送你個AC比我先好走

§~對唔起~§

不嬲都唔當你有玩+.+

Ｋiｎ

吾玩kicks..  轉玩勁舞丫 v__v' ?

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 Ｋiｎ 於 2009-4-21 07:54 PM 發表
吾玩kicks..  轉玩勁舞丫 v__v' ?

are u kidding?
i never play it before

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:48 AM 編輯 ]

D.艾加

一升到30話悶?

＊禾確特＊

知自己得罪人多升吾到 lv?

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ＊禾確特＊ 於 2009-4-21 08:13 PM 發表
知自己得罪人多升吾到 lv?

得罪人多-> seems that only u
after 30lv i don't think that lv is important for me      (just for me)
i never think that i cannot up lv because of u
or u  think that u are so important in the kicks?
i had type all the reason in this post,use yr eyes ok?
don't be silly la
p.s:i didn't say that my english is gd.

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:48 AM 編輯 ]

D.艾加

人地用中文問你,你用英文答 nice~~~~

‵逆天°﹢行

原帖由 D.艾加 於 2009-4-21 09:19 PM 發表
人地用中文問你,你用英文答 nice~~~~

maybe暗示自己英文勁

ahim

me 5g he say mud wo
use eng ho ging...
ys ar...   me eng dao ho ging lol
u 5 sell ac???
or gv ur ac to me jie

v__v

特務J-_-v 唔好走喇-_-v

devilman

我100點收你ac

bmf20041004

jj 無左你 我玩kicks都無意義......利物浦都可能由此而解散




一係你俾你個ac我

＊禾確特＊

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 08:36 PM 發表

得罪人多-->人多 seems that only u
30lv jor need up lv?
i never think about i cannot up lv
u think u can affect me?
silly
i had type all the rea ...

你d英文都好勁..
又用拼音,又有岩既..
有無人明話番我知~

no9halu

lei ng ming he up wt mei?

me ming wo

J.辛尼迪

原帖由 ＊禾確特＊ 於 2009-4-22 06:41 AM 發表

你d英文都好勁..
又用拼音,又有岩既..
有無人明話番我知~

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9yr  6hi7jl3kb 9yj6nn1            <---if u like u can translate it into chinese

[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 12:03 PM 編輯 ]

~聰明~

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 07:41 PM 發表
reason: (1)CE
(2)feel bored to the kicks -_-
watch火影lol
bye all

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-21 08:36 PM 發表

得罪人多-> seems that only u
after 30lv i don't think that lv is important for me      (just for me)
i never think that i cannot up lv because of u
or u  think that u are so important in the kicks?
i had type all the reason in this post,use yr eyes ok?
don't be silly la
p.s:i didn't say that my english is gd.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
"had type"is obviously wrong.There exists 2 mistakes.First,after had,p.p. should be used(typed).Second,past perfect tence cannot use in this sentence.
It can only be used when 2 or more events have to mention in the past.For example,I played after I had finished homework.
Hence,the correct sentence should be:I have typed all...
If it is a fact,present tence should be used.Thus,u should change "didn't" to "don't" or "never"

原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:59 AM 發表

i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...

rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9 ...

The first sentence,i don't want to explain again...
"can't u" should be changed into "aren't u",just like "isn't it".
In the third sentence,"who was" should be added between child and born.Because before born,"was"is needed.
ps:i only get lv 2 in my CE english.i have to do more proof reading to get progress...anyway,+OIL@.@

[ 本帖最後由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 05:10 PM 編輯 ]

wingyee911

咁易都唔明的話我都冇計了

R0man

原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表

bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.

don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...

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