個人的勵志文章(英文)

z型仔z

有一個point係以前d文章提過,唔講咁多,去文:

A Chinese saying goes,” Though death befalls men alike, it may be weightier than Mount Tai or light than a feather’. According to a research of the World Health Organization, there is over one million people who commit suicide every year. Suicide may occur for various reason, such as emotional pressure and financial difficulties. In my point of view, committing suicide means that life is useless and worthless. The value of life depends on your attitude towards it.

In Hong Kong, many people face pressures from different aspects, such as families, friends, jobs or studies. Some people give up easily while they come across a series of difficulties. Since they desire to escape from the reality, they may have chosen the worst way to satisfy their wants-give up their lives. However, some people with a positive attitude towards life, treat those difficulties as their greatest enemies and try their best to defeat the rivals. As everyone should confront something which makes us disappointed and upset in life, the only thing we need to do is to find some methods to release our pressures. For example, we can do sport, chat with our best friend, or shout at a tree. Although these methods look so simple, only a few people really take effective measures to release their pressures.

Life is a game between human and God. God may give challenges to us, or even put us in desperate straits. We won’t feel so painful for a short setback. In contrast, a far-reaching bad ending may be a strike for us. In the game, if we try to give up and end our life, we will become the loser.
Life is always full of hope. Do not give up as life is still the most precious thing we have. ‘All roads lead to Rome’, please be courageous and dauntless to take new challenges!

歡迎比意見!

[ 本帖最後由 z型仔z 於 09-10-3 07:44 PM 編輯 ]

marco7262002

= =英文唔好  唔識欣賞
有冇中文翻譯?

♂文仔﹏

我經常將困難當作上帝的考驗

z型仔z

原帖由 marco7262002 於 09-10-3 04:40 PM 發表
= =英文唔好  唔識欣賞
有冇中文翻譯?

呢d英文算好淺

同埋我冇寫中文板本

happycome

Although these methods look so simple, only a few people really take effective measures to release their pressures.

呢句係咪想揍字數XD

不過article無問題@p@

[ 本帖最後由 happycome 於 09-10-3 05:09 PM 編輯 ]

大刀奇俠

Though death befalls men alike, it may be weightier than Mount Tai or light than a feather’

係這句唔係幾明..............請問有沒有這句的中文對照?

johnny.C

原帖由 z型仔z 於 09-10-3 04:38 PM 發表
有一個point係以前d文章提過,唔講咁多,去文:

A Chinese saying goes,” Though death befalls men alike, it may be weightier than Mount Tai or light than a feather’. According to a research of the World ...

篇文 唔錯
不過講 解決壓力 果度
可以講一講 態度上 點樣去面對
唔好只係講release pressures
after releasing pressures 心態上 可以再點樣調整呢??

呢篇幾好
不過有某d 句子 太過公式化
grammar上有少量問題

[ 本帖最後由 johnny.C 於 09-10-3 05:50 PM 編輯 ]

johnny.C

原帖由 大刀奇俠 於 09-10-3 05:15 PM 發表
Though death befalls men alike, it may be weightier than Mount Tai or light than a feather’

係這句唔係幾明..............請問有沒有這句的中文對照?

講乜野 輕於鴻毛果d
比中國既英文miss睇 都ok

外國既話 人地會覺得好怪下

z型仔z

push

我要多d comment

清君

←英文弱智

kath

又用英文屈禾機

Jackeline

我睇到眼又殘腦又殘都係5識睇
我英文水平低

九軒葵

if we try to give up and end our life, we will become the loser.
↑loser唔使become, 用be吧…我唸應該唔係the…
唔使try to la…好"港式"…
try to end our life…end當做vb…不如用finish
個人意見
用we…不如you/one, 如果係we, 應該係the loser"s",
various reason
↑用得various, 唔該加s

[ 本帖最後由 九軒葵 於 09-10-3 07:33 PM 編輯 ]

〝爆哥〞

已閱
但唔明

wind1214

文章開始引用名句,但好似譯得麻麻,唔係幾明;
我建議你引用西方既名句,會易明d

整體黎講都明你想講咩,

先引用WHO數據,去支持多人自殺既論點,
再加以說明自殺成因,再分析解決方法.
組織力唔錯,分析力尚可,GRAMMER冇睇,
只係解決方法果度,宜增加更多實際既方法..

山水有相逢

我明你想講咩

九軒葵

原帖由 kath 於 09-10-3 07:16 PM 發表
又用英文屈禾機

屈得到你咩-.-？

孫ＭaＮ＊

Life is a game between human and God.

呢句講得唔錯

258745

E到比英文開POST嫁咩?

kwoklap

thx for sharing