Tell you guys about the failed marketing plan of HK FEZ

情場二點紅

好威呀吊你

wuheison

只係睇完個標題已經恥第緊樓主
憑咩話人地failed?
你咩斤兩呀大佬

OOOOXXX

支持一下

水錢

另外一個  我唔知係咪我錯
改埋比你睇睇先
Players have no any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing from them!
Players do not have any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing from them!

英明．神武

原帖由 wuheison 於 11-7-7 01:27 PM 發表
只係睇完個標題已經恥第緊樓主
憑咩話人地failed?
你咩斤兩呀大佬

你又憑乜野斤兩唔比我發表意見

英明．神武

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:29 PM 發表
另外一個  我唔知係咪我錯
改埋比你睇睇先
Players have no any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing from them!
Players do not any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing from  ...

可寫成: do not have
have no 都OK

水錢

原帖由 英明．神武 於 11-7-7 01:30 PM 發表


可寫成: do not have
have no 都OK

原來如屎


According to the current version, even we waste about 500 rings to gamble with the fucking Sandy(A NPC call "珊迪") , we will get nothing!

we will also get nothing!/we also get nothing
語氣會強d(still唔知會唔會好d)

[ 本帖最後由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:34 PM 編輯 ]

henrypp

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:29 PM 發表
另外一個  我唔知係咪我錯
改埋比你睇睇先
Players have no any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing from them!
Players do not have any confidence to the game, the game will earn nothing  ...

比我會咁改
Players lost their confidence to the game, so that the game won't earn anything from them.

英明．神武

原帖由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:33 PM 發表

比我會咁改
Players lost their confidence to the game, so that the game won't earn anything from them.

so that 係咁用的嗎?.?

水錢

原帖由 英明．神武 於 11-7-7 01:35 PM 發表


so that 係咁用的嗎?.?

so that可解以致

英明．神武

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:35 PM 發表

so that可解以致

我知,但係好似怪怪地

水錢

原帖由 英明．神武 於 11-7-7 01:36 PM 發表


我知,但係好似怪怪地

搵過第隻字= =
btw47樓個句野點

henrypp

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:35 PM 發表

so that可解以致

多數作文個陣講因果關係都有用so that.."
多數係寫article/argumentative essay用
conversation個陣都可以用既
例如:
This apple is expensive and rotted, so that it still in the sale box.

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改做咁:
Player lost their confidence so Gamania won't gain anything from them even a smile.

[ 本帖最後由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:41 PM 編輯 ]

水錢

原帖由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:38 PM 發表

多數作文個陣講因果關係都有用so that.."
多數係寫article/argumentative essay用
conversation個陣都可以用既
例如:
This apple is expensive and rotted, so that it still in the sale box.

Every game wants to earn profit, they should give a confidence to their players before.
另外我想問有冇問題= =

henrypp

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:41 PM 發表

Every game wants to earn profit, they should give a confidence to their players before.
另外我想問有冇問題= =

唔係game搵錢係公司搵錢..
Every company want to earn profit and reputation. And when they want this, the first thing they need to do is to give a confidence to their player first.

[ 本帖最後由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:51 PM 編輯 ]

水錢

原帖由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:42 PM 發表

唔係game搵錢係公司搵錢..
Every company wants to earn profit and reputation. And when they want this, the first thing they need to do is to give a confidence to their player first.

我已經腦殘到唔記得every後面個verb洗唔洗加s= =

henrypp

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:43 PM 發表

我已經腦殘到唔記得every後面個verb洗唔洗加s= =

我記得係要加s既...
但好多次後都會唔記得左加

水錢

原帖由 henrypp 於 11-7-7 01:51 PM 發表

我記得係要加s既...
但好多次後都會唔記得左加

所以其實洗唔洗加orz.....

英明．神武

原帖由 水錢 於 11-7-7 01:52 PM 發表

所以其實洗唔洗加orz.....

要

水錢

原帖由 英明．神武 於 11-7-7 01:54 PM 發表


要

好  另一個題目
係關於過去完成式orz