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原帖由 ◎康仔● 於 10-2-14 03:08 AM 發表 
貓兒在發震,我就立刻告訴給媽媽知,媽媽說要帶貓兒去看獸醫.到了醫院後,我看見很多人帶著他們的寵物,有狗,貓等.一會兒,經過醫生的診治後,原本貓兒只是受冷,過了幾天,貓兒就很快康復了.
When i saw a cat is trembling , i tell my mum immediately. My mum said that the cat needed to see a vet. As i got to a clinic , i found that numerous people brought their pet. For example , dogs , cats ...and so on. After a little , the vet is treating my cat. The cat just get cold . After a few days , the cat is recoverd rapidly.
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Noticing the cat's trembling I told mum about that right after. Mum said the cat needed a vet treatment. There had been crowded with their dogs, cats and such, waiting in the clinic. The cat was shortly diagnosed with just cold, and recovered a few days later. |
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